Fiction Story

This is my first time ever writing a fiction story, and for that matter any story. So help me GOD!!! Read on and your views or comments would be appreciated.

Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Chapter 2

Sammy never knew them well enough and he found it even stranger that he had offered them a drink at his cost at the pub, he usually visited everyday for a quick drink after work. And to top this he found it the strangest that he offered them, complete strangers, a lift home after the drinks. It was completely unlike him he thought lying there in a pool of blood with the gun wound in his chest and left thigh.He was so used to being an over cautious person and this one slip he had given to his persistent habit, just to have some fun, ultimately paid him ugly.

These guys were young , lively and seems to be having a lot of fun. And that made him to ask them to join him so that he could make some friends in his dull boring life. He had no friends and his stern features kept woman at bay too. Now he couldn't do anything about his looks, so he had just hoped that someone would look beyond it one day. These guys where sounding fun and after a couple of drinks when they asked him for a drop he was more than willing to drop them and this way he thought he could also show off his brand new SUV, which he had recently purchased. It the most expensive vehicle he had ever owned and he loved it for all the latest high tech features it came with. It gave him a big ego boost to see his colleagues talk about it in the sly during lunch breaks and hushed themselves when he was around. They are so jealous, he thought.

These guys hopped in to his SUV praising it and telling how grand it was. And that, that was exactly what they wanted to own when they have the money....so he bragged to them more about the features of his new possession, as he drove...and then someone from them shot him right as they approached a corner of a dark lonely street..and before he knew wat hit him he was pushed out of the moving SUV on to the road.

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